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Stick around for the final week. Th...Cheers, grin!<br /><br />Stick around for the final week. That's when the gloves come off.W.F.https://www.blogger.com/profile/18354701327343219309noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8735499716586768250.post-1678686096471678892009-08-16T15:52:12.302-07:002009-08-16T15:52:12.302-07:00A pleasure to read each poem, but Kathi's poem...A pleasure to read each poem, but Kathi's poem... wow. I can relate with the recent GI Joe film, a critical flop, but the GI Joe franchise is and will always be tied to my older brother, who died at 21 when I was 13. GI Joe was a bond we shared in childhood, and in watching the movie last week, I felt him near me. The interweaving of Star Wars and the father's death was well done and very real to me. Good job, Kathi - you've captured something special to me here. Kudos to Emily and W.F. as well - thanks for participating and sharing your work. All three of you have guts and the talent to back it up!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8735499716586768250.post-41031070251372880162009-08-16T14:42:16.627-07:002009-08-16T14:42:16.627-07:00Oh pish posh, I know that. I'm joking. Thank...Oh pish posh, I know that. I'm joking. Thanks for reading and commenting, it's much appreciated. And I, for one, will continue to send you that fruit basket at the holidays; I know how your wife loves preserves.Emilyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18141483859675849462noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8735499716586768250.post-77913922799941368292009-08-16T11:38:27.440-07:002009-08-16T11:38:27.440-07:00W.F.- thanks for being a good sport, though I'...W.F.- thanks for being a good sport, though I'm greatly hurt I'll not be getting a Christmas gift, not even some snow? <br /><br />Emily- I'm not questioning the vitality in your veins but in your poem. I liked your poem quite a bit, but felt some slight disconnect between all the pieces.Stephen S. Millshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05480344613729894754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8735499716586768250.post-2719407892849185772009-08-16T09:20:45.065-07:002009-08-16T09:20:45.065-07:00Isn't my dead grandfather's profound hatre...Isn't my dead grandfather's profound hatred for Gene Kelly pretty vital? I feel its vitality coursing through my veins each day. Each and every damn day.Emilyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18141483859675849462noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8735499716586768250.post-70910030191234931842009-08-16T09:11:13.718-07:002009-08-16T09:11:13.718-07:00I KNEW I should have written "15 memes for sn...I KNEW I should have written "15 memes for snow".W.F.https://www.blogger.com/profile/18354701327343219309noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8735499716586768250.post-58971485161055404622009-08-16T08:55:30.689-07:002009-08-16T08:55:30.689-07:00My poem's vitality feels threatened. It might...My poem's vitality feels threatened. It might act out, shortly.Emilyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18141483859675849462noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8735499716586768250.post-84442384870766811522009-08-16T07:54:01.610-07:002009-08-16T07:54:01.610-07:00Stephen, thanks for your comments. I can't spe...Stephen, thanks for your comments. I can't speak for everyone else, but I really love when people leave comments here (especially with names).<br /><br />And you're off my Christmas list.W.F.https://www.blogger.com/profile/18354701327343219309noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8735499716586768250.post-42367513481901533312009-08-16T07:39:18.675-07:002009-08-16T07:39:18.675-07:00Pop culture poetry is a huge interest of mine, so ...Pop culture poetry is a huge interest of mine, so I was excited to see what the poets would do with this challenge. About 75 percent of my own poems use pop culture in some way and I taught a freshmen writing class for two years on pop culture poetry, and the trouble always is making the poem bigger than just your reference and making that reference vital to the poem without it becoming the poem. I think that's where the poets seemed to have struggled here. <br /><br />While I enjoyed the idea of Kristen's poem about Spock, it felt like it didn't move in multiple directions. There were great lines, but also some clunky spots. <br /><br />Emily went a different direction by not leading with a pop culture reference but working some later on in the poem, which is often a good move. I also like the quotation from the back of "All-American Poem," which is a really good book. But overall the references didn't feel vital to the poem, but the poem itself is well written. <br /><br />W.F.'s poem felt a little overworked and the whole 26 words for snow thing is very overdone and has become uninteresting to me. It's not a necessarily a bad poem, more so not my taste. I wanted it to have more to it. <br /><br />Kathi's poem stands out as making the pop culture reference vital to the poem. Weaving this famous scene from Stars Wars with the car accident that killed the speaker's father is well-crafted and interesting. Here the pop culture doesn't take over the poem but it is also a force in the poem and I can see why it is there and how it connects to the overall topic. I think Kathi's poem is a clear winner in this group.<br /><br />Those are my thoughts. Feel free to disagree. <br /><br />-StephenStephen S. Millshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05480344613729894754noreply@blogger.com